HMD, soul brotha?

This is where you get to give me some concrit! Tell me how shitty of a job I'm doing, stroke my gingery boner, but please know that if you do give me any tips, I will try to work on it as I see fit and I appreciate any help I can get! 
 And if you're good boys and girls I might even give you a cigarette. Maybe. 


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